This commentary was requested by unfolded73  (mwah!). Would you like to request a commentary of your own? You can do so right here.

A special thank-you to ladychi  for contributing her thoughts to this commentary as well. :)

( Commentary of an adult-rated chapter, under the cut. )

How it works:

In the comments, you request a one-shot fic or a single chapter of a longer fic for me to do a DVD-style commentary on. I then do so, wherein I yammer in italics in between paragraphs about what I wrote, why, how, etc.... It's really quite simple!

You may select from the following:
( A list! A very palpable list! )

Hello, faithful reader, and welcome to the commentary for Xenohorticulture and You, requested by adovesosoiled .  If you'd like to get a request in for commentary, here's the original post.

And also: IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY, GO VOTE TEN!

( This is absurdly long. )

Requested by unfolded73 .

Want to get in on the fic commentary meme? Original post here.

( Delicious, delicious fic meta... )

So, the awards are over, Held in Trust is moving at a glacial rate (though still moving, I assure you all), I think it's time for the fic commentary meme again.

Here's how it works, you leave a comment with something off my master list (below) and I write the literature-equivalent of a DVD commentary for it. I might talk about where the idea came ( Read more... )

Chapter 8 of The One True Free Life, commentary writen for astridweasley
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Hey look it's a commentary not about porn! That's exciting! If you'd like to get in on it as well and request a fic for me to comment on, here's the original post.

ladychi requested the "penultimate" chapter of The One True Free Life for commentary, and I'm going to give a bonus by doing the final two chapters. I just reread the last chapter last night ( Read more... )

And welcome back to what has more or less turned in to Reading Porn With Tenzo. If you'd like to get in on it as well (which I encourage whole-heartedly--I love writing these things to a shameful degree), here's the original post.

( It's incredibly adult. No, really. )

And continuing with the fic commentary meme (this is like crack, seriously)! If you'd like to get in on it as well and request a fic for me to comment on, here's the original post.

Hallo faithful readers! Welcome to the commentary of Chapter 19 of The One True Free Life, entitled "The still point of the turning world." Fair warning, it contains a ( Read more... )

Moving forward with the fic commentary meme! If you'd like to get in on it as well (which I encourage whole-heartedly--I love writing these things to a shameful degree), here's the original post.

( I don't think I need to say how extremely ADULT this is going to be. )